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Verse Novels: A String of Emotional Moments

We’d like to thank Padma Venkatraman and Joy McCullough for this blog post. The two are teaming up as faculty for Novels in Verse: Analyze and Generate June 11-14, along with special guest editor Andrew Karre. Here they interview each other about why they write novels in verse and discuss some of the ways in which verse novels differ from prose novels. Thank you, Padma and Joy!


Joy McCullough
Joy McCullough
Padma: Joy, what first sparked your interest in writing poetry/verse novels?

Joy: I mentored for Pitch Wars for five years. During that time, writers submitted manuscripts to me and I would choose one to work with intensively. The very first year I was extremely drawn to Laura Shovan’s verse novel (THE LAST FIFTH GRADE OF EMERSON ELEMENTARY, later published by Random House), though I told her very clearly that I knew nothing about poetry and could only really offer suggestions about character and story. There was so much about the form that resonated with me, and I began to read as much as I could. I rarely read stand-alone poetry, because I really connect with story and character, but verse novels offered me those things, plus the chance to play freely with language. I was hooked!

Padma: Can you recommend a few verse novels or poetry books that aren’t yours (or mine) that you love?

The Last Fifth Grade of Emerson ElementaryJoy: THE LAST FIFTH GRADE OF EMERSON ELEMENTARY! It’s a marvelous intro to poetry for young readers, because Laura uses a bunch of different forms and includes exercises in the back so readers can try them out.

THE MOON WITHIN by Aida Salazar is a 2019 middle grade I absolutely loved about a girl whose mom wants to celebrate her first period with an ancestral Mexican moon ceremony. It’s beautiful, lyrical verse and a super honest, unflinching coming-of-age story.

EMMY IN THE KEY OF CODE by Aimee Lucido is another 2019 middle grade I loved for its really inventive use of the verse form to weave in the language of both music and coding.

Padma: What are some key similarities/differences you see between verse novels and prose novels?

Joy: As I mentioned, I enjoy verse novels far more than stand-alone poetry because of how I need to connect to a character and a story when I’m reading. So certainly prose and verse novels have in common a narrative and character arc, stakes, etc. And much of the process of figuring out those things as a writer is similar whether I’m writing in verse or prose. The key difference is the way language is used, of course. The use of white space on the page. And verse is often more internal and dialed into emotions more than actions. (This is something I imagine my editor and I will discuss more at our retreat–during revisions on my second young adult book we found ourselves trying to work with verse that depicted, essentially, a quest with battle scenes, etc. Ack!)

Padma Venkatraman
Padma Venkatraman
Joy: Padma, since you write in both verse and prose, can you talk about how you know when a story is better suited to one or the other?

Padma: In a way, it’s organic. My books appear as voices first, then become movies, then ghosts that haunt and possess me–but when they begin, the voice I hear speaks to me in verse or prose and I just know. That said, I do think that for a novel in verse there needs to be a real heartbeat–because it’s like a string of emotional moments; I think for the most part, a fast, action-paced adventure that’s heavier on what I call “external” plot is probably not well suited to verse.

Joy: Turning your question back on you: can you recommend a few verse novels or poetry books that you love?

Soaring EarthPadma: I fell in love with 3 verse memoirs that I read last year: Laurie Halse Anderson’s SHOUT; Nikki Grimes’s ORDINARY HAZARDS; and Margarita Engle’s SOARING EARTH. Holly Thompson’s THE LANGUAGE INSIDE has a poem in it that has the same title as the book, which is so innovative that I often use it when I teach. Jacqueline Woodson’s EACH KINDNESS and THE OTHER SIDE and SHOW WAY are picture books, but they’re also poetry. Finally, Janet Wong’s SUITCASE FULL OF SEAWEED has so many writing prompts–that is just such a cool addition, in the latest edition of her book. As for sheer poetry, Marilyn Nelson’s CARVER: A LIFE IN POEMS and also, THANK U (edited by Miranda Paul) – an ecclectic mix of poems. Well, I’ll stop there.

Joy: You have a doctorate in oceanography! The differences between scientific and artistic fields seem fairly obvious; what is the overlap? How does your background as a scientist inform your creative writing?

Padma: Mathematicians speak of elegant proofs and equations; we speak of elegant sentences. Equations are mathematical sentences. The bond between mathematics and music is often discussed. Language, at its best, sings. To me, there’s something beautiful about pattern, whether mathematical or linguistic. I love mathematics and language, both.


A time to dance by Padma VenkatramanPadma Venkatraman is the author of THE BRIDGE HOME which has garnered 8 stars, and has been honored as one of the best books of 2019 by Kirkus, NYPL, Chicago Library and others. THE BRIDGE HOME is also the recipient of a Walter Award, through the We Need Diverse Books organization, and a Golden Kite Award from SCBWI. THE BRIDGE HOME was the global read aloud book for 2019. Padma is also the author of A TIME TO DANCE, ISLAND’S END and CLIMBING THE STAIRS. Visit her at www.padmavenkatraman.com or follow her on twitter @padmatv or ig venkatraman.padma.

Blood Water Paint by Joy McCulloughJoy McCullough’s debut young adult novel Blood Water Paint earned honors such as the National Book Award longlist, winner of the Washington State Book Award and Pacific Northwest Book Award, finalist for the ALA Morris Award, a Publishers Weekly Flying Start and four starred reviews. Her debut middle grade novel, A Field Guide to Getting Lost, is forthcoming in 2020.

She writes books and plays from her home in the Seattle area, where she lives with her husband and two children. She studied theater at Northwestern University, fell in love with her husband atop a Guatemalan volcano, and now spends her days surrounded by books and kids and chocolate.


Novels in Verse: Analyze and Generate
June 11-14, 2020
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New for 2020: 2 online courses for verse novelists:
The Advantages and Disadvantages of Writing Novels in Verse and Novels in Vignettes, September 16-October 21
Creating an Image System That Works for Your Verse Novel, October 28-November 25, 2020

Posted on: March 10, 2020

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