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In “Ars Poetica,” Archibald
MacLeish famously wrote, “A poem should not mean / But
be.” Had you not paid your money and were we not obliged
to fill this hour, he might have been said to put the kabash
on our whole topic. For isn’t that what “theme”
is—the meaning of the thing? The question forever pours
from readers: “What’s it mean?” Or in its
slightly softer form: “What’s it about?”
Well, even if we reply, “It isn’t about
anything; it just is,” chances are we lie.
For, absurdists notwithstanding, everything “means”
something; everything is “about” something. And
even if we writers are so insidiously clever and subtle as
to totally distill the “about” out of our story
and leave nothing but a residue of pure being, we still will
most likely have made use of theme in our building of the
story.
To switch metaphors here, think of theme as the scaffolding
upon which you stand and rise and you lay down the brick,
the words of your story. When the story is complete, the scaffolding
comes down, no longer needed. Your work stands alone.
Having a theme, knowing what you want your story to be about,
will add depth to otherwise shallow moments, will help guide
you in what to say, what not to say, which word to use. For
example, consider the last several paragraphs of James Joyce’s
story “The Dead” and Hemingway’s novel The
Old Man and the Sea.
Not only does The Old Man and the Sea illustrate
today’s topic, it also reminds us to keep it in perspective.
Having noted the importance of theme, let’s do an about-face
here and remember this: never, never, never
allow theme to dominate story. Story is paramount. We are
writing fiction, not sermons. If our readers want sermons,
let ’em go to church. We are storytellers, not message
mongers.
As the army does with reporters, your message should be unobtrusively
embedded in the story. To the extent that it is visible at
all, it should appear to rise naturally, organically, like
thin smoke from the embers of your story. Do not pound meaning
into your reader; allow it to fly off like a dove from your
hand. This can’t be stressed enough: release, do not
impose.
Unfortunately, this notion is not always embraced by readers.
One of the more amusing outcomes that we experience as authors
is to hear others tell us what our story means—which
in at least half the cases is news to us. So take heart. If
you happen to suffer a lapse and fail to include meaning in
your story, don’t worry—your readers will.
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With titles like Do
the Funky Pickle, Theres A Girl in
My Hammerlock, and Who Put That Hair in
My Toothbrush?, Jerry Spinelli has won the
hearts of many young readers. His 1991 release
Maniac Magee won the Newbery Medal, and
his eighteenth book, Wringer, received
a Newbery Honor. Jerry's latest, Milkweed
(Knopf), has been called "stunning"
by Kirkus Reviews.
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